Daniel Lurz (furthermore, SB,
(,))
1. Further it is
said in he advert, that freedom of enterprise was a basic liberty.
2. For underlining
these arguments, Conoco uses the statements. (to underline)
3. These people
are very famous to the people, who lived in this time around 1776. (SB, that)
4. Profit was one
reason why England settle in America. (the English, settled)
5. When Jefferson
thought it was a good idea they will believe it easier.
(more easily)
6. They did not
want that some people got victims of this. (SB, became, SB)
7. Dear Sirs, dear
madams, (dear Sir
or Madam)
8. It is an attempt
to prevent the public to abridge the freedom of its interactions. (from –ing,?)
9. This of a matter
of fact will have negative influence on the economical situation.
Jessica
Klein (A, economic!)
10. There would
have never been such a prosperity without individual enterprise. (never have)
11. Business can
justify the validity of it’s ethical values.
(its)
12. Competition
has lead society to new levels of wealth. (led)
Katharina Matull (is
intended to, (,))
13. That quotation
should underline the opinion, that there can be no other freedom.
14. The connection
between economical freedom and progress doesn’t exist.
(economic)
15. The quotation
should warn the people to limit freedom. (should?, not to limit)
16. If he would
be against it, he would also be against the founding fathers. (if-clause)
17. He is against all others, so against
all for which the Americans fought against the English. (!)
18. There was your
advertisement according to the discussion of economical freedom. (about?)
Christina Duhr (make it clear,
general freedom)
19. The advertisement wants to make the
citizens clear that that freedom is part of the general enterprise.
20. The freedom
of enterprises is connected with other freedoms. (freedom of enterprise)
21. It is a reason
for the America’s growth. ((the))
22. If you loose
one kind of freedom you will loose the others. (lose)
23. They told us
to remember on this importance. ((on))
24. An example
for this are the texts. (is)
25. An Conoco goes
a step higher and says that it is important for the growth of America. (further)
26. If one has
no freedom, all the others can’t have freedom, too. (either)
27. And so is America
today one of the most successful countries. (St)
28. Organisations
which cared for their profits are one of the most important aspects. (Gr:pl/sg)
29. Then there
will be less people who have the opportunity to have any job. (fewer)
30. That means
that it is much said and promised in America. (much is said …)
31. But this advertisement
isn’t saying anything about price increases. (doesn’t say)
32. The quotations
between the text shall underline and support the arguments. (shall?)
33. All quotations
have a same meaning. (similar)
34. Economic freedom
is strong connected to the other freedoms. (strongly)
35. They enter
new areas of economy like the working with nuclear energy or genetics. ((the), ??)
36. If the President
could appoint all judges there would be very fast injustice. (injustice v.fast)